It's nice.
A nice flash, but I think you could have done a lot more with emotional moments. It sounds simple and the song could have helped making this much more dramatic.
It's nice.
A nice flash, but I think you could have done a lot more with emotional moments. It sounds simple and the song could have helped making this much more dramatic.
OK...
It's good.
The song is great, really enjoyable throughout, especially when I realize that this is made only by gunshots. The only downside is the images that keep cutting to the new ones. I got dizzy watching this. I might only listen to it only instead of watching. Try joining the different gunners together on stage.
That's a good idea, but it would be unimaginably hard. I'll give a try on my next video.
Short yet conveyed.
Though the movie is short, but it expresses the haiku very clearly. I like the drawing style instead of using the digital drawing. :)
Good.
I think #2 is good enough to laugh, the rest of that might need some improvement on the humor. :) You might rush over the things too much, but over all, I think it's still good.
Thanks alot :)
Good.
A good movie has a BGM that matches the motion and emotions! This song, Kan Kan from O2Jam (which I play) really fits in here, plus a good animation and graphic quality.
thank you for the comment !! i appreciate it.
Is violence an only thing people think of?
I like the introduction where you put the words down, matching the beat of the song, but what I saw in the inside is really disappointing. Sorry. No point and concept at all.
I know there wasn't any concept, it was just shirt simple and silly :D
har har, not everyone will like it :D
Sorry, it's too sudden of nonsense
I couldn't see why mario wanna have a sudden fight with another guy like that for no reason. If you develop a good plot, this may turn out better.
The graphics are acceptable, yet could also be much better than this. I really look forward to the next one which should be improved. :)
they call it blood-lust or something; you know, when you want to start a riot?
thanks anyways
Pretty sketchy.
The song is OK, but you need to take more time making this project a project. :) With the girl's hair jiggling and torn from the rest of the head and other characters mumbling throughout the story, it doesn't make the whole thing pretty enjoyable. Please make a good plot and also the graphics, and I'm sure that'll help a lot.
Thanks, I think... I'm doing my best, but actually just figured out a few things just after finishing this. Believe it or not, the thing that took the most time here was trying to fix the hair, as at first it completely detached from her head! It was scary...
Simply simple
Your plot is quite simple and quite fun to watch, yet if you could add some intensity in it, it could be better. :)
Yeah in retrospect it seems pretty slow paced...
Thanks!
Sounds great.
I like how you have thrown in the transitions between the two scenes, and it looks very natural and flowing. The sounds and plot are considerably good, though the storyline itself might not be that strong. Over all, I'm satisfied. :)
plot and storyline are the same thing sir.
Xyirx offers paths that lead to adventures within your soul. -- Classical, Epic, and Ambient are what use to convey my message. Feel free to listen to my pieces. Piano is my leading melody.
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