Xyirx's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sexy Handsome Veggies]

Spooky...

Really spooky though creative. I love broccoli the most out of all of these. He looks like a zombie ready to devour some flesh. :D

Merol responds:

:D
THANKS A LOT!!

[SHW-29 Graveyard]

Great.

I dig lights (or is it looks more like northern lights?) on the background there. It makes the whole picture come to life and attract viewers more. Great job on that. But I could still sense that you're still keeping lights, shadow, and intensity of colors of characters to minimum. Lines are also sketchy looking to me (It's not a bad thing to be sketchy, but there's a different between sketch and sketchy). Like the other review I've said, try adding some more intensities in light and shadow for your art and drawings like these will have amazing depth of field, like an illusion.

Toki911 responds:

Glad you like it. I really appreciate the review. I'll try doing some more contrasting shades next time.

[SHS-31 Battleground]

Great capture but lacks intensity.

It's a satisfying-looking piece of art here. I love the concept and short story you've written 'cause it fits with the art; however, I think you could have added more things to make this piece even more dramatic. For example, making this scene darker with some lights from the moon revealing the bloodshed could really gives me a chill. Right now, the whole image sort of looks flat to me because there's not enough light and shadow elements in. Try throwing in more shades and shadows in this piece, and you'll surely capture emotions much more.

Anyway, it's a very good piece of art. :) Keep it coming

Xyirx
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Toki911 responds:

Thanks again for the reviews, they were just what I needed to inspire me to continue doing these drawings. I couldn't really find a good way to show the distance between the foreground and the background, and that idea about more shading might just be it. I think I'll try to remake this scene in another picture, hopefully capturing more emotions.

[Japanese Wolf]

Beautiful edges.

The way you drew the jagged lines are very nice. I can see Japanese art quite obviously. However, I think that you could have finished his right paw with ink there. That is the only spot I find strange. Oh, and try using scanner instead of camera when you're posting art. It'd look more neat and flash won't come in to disturb your masterpiece.

MonoFlauta responds:

yes the problem is that i need to get an scanner :P thanks for the review!