It's just too short.
I love the fire effect, but it's just that the characters may move too slow, and the whole trailer is just way too short without leaving some storyline for the audience to follow.
Overall, it's quite good, but you could do better.
THank you.
"but you can do better" Yes I can......I just need to have time and effort lol
Xyirx offers paths that lead to adventures within your soul. -- Classical, Epic, and Ambient are what use to convey my message. Feel free to listen to my pieces. Piano is my leading melody.
Age 33, Male
Dragonkin
Thailand
Joined on 4/27/07
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