Impressive for 13 years old! :D
I have to say that I'm impressed to listen to a song made by a 13-year-old kid. I love the piano though, but you could soften it down a little bit more just to feel that the notes are constantly minimalistic-like. The chords, somehow, have a whole lot of extensions to them, but that doesn't matter much. :)
Try to deviate your drum pattern some more too.
Wow, thanks man!
The drum pattern is something like... I dont know, I wanted to make a slow one and it's te better to use right here, sometimes I forget to change it, thanks.
~Bru2712
Chilling out.
This piece sounds like a music when you're going to the party and everything starts to get fun. :D I admire the guitar, the use of frets (if I'm not mistaken). Pleasing to the ear indeed. I bet you could make this song a little longer though. :)
A little more blend to make this spectacular. :)
Piano plays quite a simple tune which is OK, but when you bring in the saw just in the middle of nowhere, it kinda ruins the beauty of piano, in my opinion. If it were something like soft sound of flute or violin , this would be really great. :D
Unfathomable.
I like the sounds you choose. You seem to use them wisely since they convey a nice message throughout the song. This piece, however, sounds quite repetitive to me, and the drum could be softened a little bit, maybe sidestick might work better than snare.
Other than that, you've done well.
I experimented a little with the sidestick selection that I have and even after a bit of twiddling it still sounded... off. But the drums could come down a bit I agree ^^
Thanks for leaving your thoughts with me, appreciated =D
Yes, calm.
I think you've done a pretty job here. It sounds very atmospheric and sensational somehow. Though I have no idea what the title of the song mean, I can imagine wandering in the frozen cavern with bright crystals. Very beautiful piece.
Crossing the boarder line of classical and techno.
This song just represents you. Practical use of electric guitar, a fancy sparklings from piano, original saw to keep the melody solid, and the purcussions that FL bestows upon you. In the beginning, it sounds pretty much like other dance songs, then guitar comes into play, making variations. Personally, the 1:27 part sounds too strong and distinct that it outshines the beauty of the piano.
The 2:22, you shows your secret weapon, key change from Cm -> Dm. It's pretty impressive because of your piano that plays a major role. The other structures are pretty much the same as the first one, but I still like it nevertheless.
Then when guitar shines its solo, it reminds me of Operation: Evolution (near the end of the O:E). Quite good to listen, but I'd like to have more new techniques and melodies other than this though.
I've gotta mention the ending.....The piano does very well here. Dramatic!
Brand new flashback.
I admire the use of flanger (if I'm not mistaken) which kinda blur the melodies throughout the song, plus the pitch-changing too. In the first part, it seems like there's a lot of energy, yet it doesn't move me as much as your other songs. The false ending is well done with a simple pad & piano (also percussions) proceeding it, then wrapped by the soft ending. I think it's quite unique in the piano part though. The end brings back your original style in the past (people who listen your 2005-2006 would definitely sense this). I'd say it's spectacular but could be better in peaks. It lacks a great climax. :)
Exhilarating! :D
This one has a lot of kicks throughout. It seems to stop at some point, the it erupts again, and maybe, just maybe, some sound effects would make the transition between 2 parts better. Anyway, for this piece I'd say it has a happy melody. :D
You could master the snare a little bit, it sounds too loud sometimes, other than that, you've got a thumb up from me. XD
Lucid and powerful.
The piece is flowing throughout the song with sweet melody. Though at some points, too much snare is used, it still sounds great over all. :D
Smooth.
This would fit really well in RPGs. The melody is flowing smoothly. I could hardly get bored from this.
Xyirx offers paths that lead to adventures within your soul. -- Classical, Epic, and Ambient are what use to convey my message. Feel free to listen to my pieces. Piano is my leading melody.
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